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 Belyndria Khallian yes... another Khallian

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PostSubject: Belyndria Khallian yes... another Khallian   Sat Mar 05, 2011 11:28 am

Belyndria in her time was actually one to not think even existed except for when she was but a little girl with her parents and sisters within the khallian family she was thought to be killed but did live as she was left on her own at the time not knowing her own title and blood as she was founded by a group of shattered sun ambassadors and was taken in by them to live out what she could of her life as a forgotten.
The years went by as she became a well trained fighter within the ranks learning under the light and the naaru. Not long after she hit 85 years of age she got a message from her friends within the shattered sun to join them with the horde and alliance to venture into northrend. As she read the letter this made her feel as if there was more she could do other then in the isle of Quel'danas.
as she got off the Zepplin in the Howling Fjords she was promptly greeted by her dear friends and they begain their work within the frozen top. as the days turned to weeks, weeks turned to months they ended up within the continent known as dragonblight its here Belyndria's life took a turn as she got caught in a blizzard getting cut off from her friends she found shelter in a cave near the north little did she know was this was the cavern of which frostmourne once laid dormant while she slept through the blizzard a pair ov val'kyr patrolling the cavern saw this elf lying in the snow seeing her as trespassing they swooped down and grabbed her taking her to the icecrown citadel.
all she could feel now was fear, fear that she wouldn't make it out alive as she was put in a cell where she stayed for most of her time. eventually after what seemed like weeks they brought her up to arthas himself as she was struck with frostmourne ending her life. for that split second before the blade slashed her she saw her life flashed before her eyes and at that point she knew she was a Khallian then got screwed over and didn't remember shit. As she trained for some time as a death knight a need to find her out who she was started to grow until she broke away from the lich kings grasp after the attack on lights hope it became her goal to find out what she was.
years went by and at this point Belyndria had perfected her own arts in the arts of frost for a death knight and was at the age of 113 (( from here I meet melo etc etc)) ((description of Bely comming soon))


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PostSubject: Re: Belyndria Khallian yes... another Khallian   Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:30 pm

Loved it but, one slight note Nii, a death knight looses all of it's memories due to being reanimated as a death knight for the rest it's okay.

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PostSubject: Re: Belyndria Khallian yes... another Khallian   Sat Mar 05, 2011 1:13 pm

alrighty then I guess I'll rewrite that part
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PostSubject: Re: Belyndria Khallian yes... another Khallian   Sat Mar 05, 2011 11:20 pm

Pretty good. You succesfully wrote what I wanted you to. Now, there's always room for improvement. But, some proper grammar would be nice.
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